This was interesting and I wondered if you created this tale or if you knew these people or were related to them? That's a lot of children, too...poor Anne!! and poor Montie!!
I've read some...enough to get to the vampire piece and this one is like the vampires in a discovery of witches...I am not confy with vampire but matthew Goode got to me. 😅 I think your writing is very good...I'd do a few more paragraph breaks...I was wondering about what happened to Montie in the first piece about the brothers. At first I thought one of his brothers killed him..the one that was jealous of him. Well, keep going because it does draw you in and i'm sure it would have an audience.
You know, when I first saw the picture of William, I got this awfully physical reaction. My hands grew cold, and there was an ache in my chest, like a blow or something. My head spun and I almost felt faint. Everything screamed it was him. And later on when I reached the end of Leighton 's book on Monty, I realised he was of the same mind, and he wasn't the only one.
I am writing - and I think that's exactly what you told me to do back in 2022:)))
Yes...I guess I was right. 😅And also I think having that kind of energy connection is like the 'channel' that draws you to the Cauldron for inspiration.
This was interesting and I wondered if you created this tale or if you knew these people or were related to them? That's a lot of children, too...poor Anne!! and poor Montie!!
This is a very real family. I've been in love with Montie for decades now, and I have a whole section about him here. And a novel in works.
https://open.substack.com/pub/victorianhell/p/mjd?r=257g8a&utm_campaign=post&utm_medium=web
I've read some...enough to get to the vampire piece and this one is like the vampires in a discovery of witches...I am not confy with vampire but matthew Goode got to me. 😅 I think your writing is very good...I'd do a few more paragraph breaks...I was wondering about what happened to Montie in the first piece about the brothers. At first I thought one of his brothers killed him..the one that was jealous of him. Well, keep going because it does draw you in and i'm sure it would have an audience.
You know, when I first saw the picture of William, I got this awfully physical reaction. My hands grew cold, and there was an ache in my chest, like a blow or something. My head spun and I almost felt faint. Everything screamed it was him. And later on when I reached the end of Leighton 's book on Monty, I realised he was of the same mind, and he wasn't the only one.
I am writing - and I think that's exactly what you told me to do back in 2022:)))
Yes...I guess I was right. 😅And also I think having that kind of energy connection is like the 'channel' that draws you to the Cauldron for inspiration.
PS, I just went back and looked at William the Younger. Really strange, haunted eyes.
Yep. And he isn't really old there. I'd say, about 35-40… like the weight of the world is on his shoulders.
That is an interesting reaction…